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The Puppet is lower left and the Puppet Master is the upper right, two more monsters for the Game Series I am working on, just basic sketches of each. Some perspective problems with these but all in all a good start. Back stories and what not will be posted after I complete their in game look in the next pictures. :]
(c) TimeGlitch 2008 Do not steal this art or concept as it has a commercial interest for me, If you take it I will hunt you down and take legal action :[ I ask any fan art wait until I have produced the Final pictures for these as I do not with to have outside influences in this project, hope you understand  Comments
 Ohh, I don't know how well I'd do on critiquing this. x3 But I really like it; the stitches are my favorite part. For me? I'd probably make the style a little more rugged for this type of picture.
-- I like Juice. Orange Juice. Apple Juice. Juicy Juice.  Thanks
 I always love getting comments =] so you mean like torn fabric, pulled seams that sort of thing yeah? I was wondering about that too, sort of hinting at it with his patchwork of random fabrics. Glad it came through and that you also thing its the right way to go with him, The puppet master will fight with over sized sowing needles as spears, and half pairs of fabric scissors as swords ext, I have quite the back story waiting till I can get a picture to match -- Searching for inspiration in a time of degradation... Well, it sounds like a really great concept. That along with the shading. It looks very soft. But for me I'd probably haggard it up a little. x3 -- I like Juice. Orange Juice. Apple Juice. Juicy Juice.  hehehe they are kinda cute
 seems like the game will be awesome!! <3 ^_^ -- I’ll be the best mistake you’ll ever make yeah Dx I just need inspiration to keep going on it... be my muse!?!
-- Searching for inspiration in a time of degradation... sure! XD what do I do? ^_^;;
-- I’ll be the best mistake you’ll ever make Iunknow
 hmm tell me to draw something  x3-- Searching for inspiration in a time of degradation... hmmm draw a big fluff ball with randomly sharp teeth? wearing a top hat?
XD I actually don't even know... ummmm......>_< I'm not good at this -- I’ll be the best mistake you’ll ever make Hehe.. kay :]
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Okay, I'm supposed to be critiquing this, not gushing over it, so let's move on. Lineart is good, some variation of line apparent between the inner and outer lines, but you could expand on that and really make it pop by adding thicker portions to some of the lines (see ~amio for examples of what I mean). Colouring is good for what this is, a basic concept sketch, but smoother transitions between colours and more attention to keeping within the lines might suit the look of the piece more...(not that I'm one to talk, considering my current colouring style is precisely the opposite). You could also use a stronger highlight (try 60-80% as opposed to 50%) to add more Wow! factor. I love the way you've drawn the fabric 'folds'...my only suggestion there would be to make sure you give the same attention to detail to the Puppet Master's hip joints as to the rest of the joints in the picture.
In terms of character and game design, I think these guys are pretty perfect. Quirky, creepy in a cute way, and original without being too outside the realm of the Gamer's experience. Nice job!
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